Friday, June 5, 2009

Article for newspaper.

As you may know if you read the "About Me" i'm in my School news paper. This time i decided to right about " Summer Blockbusters". In the article it features Transformers 2, T4, and night at the museam 2. I only chose to tell you the part about Transformers 2. Tell me what you think about the article excert :-)

"Did you enjoy the 2007 blockbuster Transformers? If so, your in luck because Transformers: Revenge of the Fallen is guarenteed to have you begging for more and more when the evil decepticons and the heroic autobots are in a battle till the end. Shia LeBouf and Megan Fox are reprising their roles as Sam Witwicky and the gorgous Mikaela Banes. Transformers: Revenge of the Fallen is set to amaze the audience with yet another box-office smash, debuting on June 24."

3 comments:

  1. Pretty good extract although i must say when i hear you promoting the film you sound as if you really enjoy it and pursuades the reader to read on. It might be best adding a bit of backstory about the TF`s in another part of the article so you can convince more people to go to the film.

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  2. ^^^^^^

    Ya thank's for the tip. Only te article was released on Friday.

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  3. Oh ok :) Good luck with more articles in the future. Keep us updated :)

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